Wednesday, May 23, 2012

What Comes After

Sunshine on white sheets
Cling lazily to dark
Limbs and torsos
Each covered with tiny beads of sweat
Evaporating with the summer heat.

One is asleep.
The other one wondering

If she should go


1 comment:

  1. This is so powerful, especially the latter half.

    I think it might be the stylistic metre of the latter half that just leaves a reader stunned- words that sound so well you want to say it to yourself over and over again in exactly the way it has been written, with the heavy pauses and punctuations.